(Do a pc on the dramatic presentation of your blog)

it somewat reflects the state of her life...the strong blue shows her passion for living and pehaps her liking of the colour blue but the eye catching combination also show her desire to be noticed..to be noted...for her entries to be read ..while the pale blue seems to reflect the lethargic state of her mind, bothered by problems faced every day.probably the 'lightness' of the words which just seem to flow out of her mind easily...

the title 'me just want to be me' shows a sense of 'pleading' of the writer of the blog, hoping to gain the understanding from the people around here and even herself. the lack of emotional expression in these words also expresses a sense of lost and loneliness. the uncompleted sentence reflects that the entries will be ever flowing....and that there will never be a definite end or answer to all her problem..and that they will continue too. the use of the words "me" twice further emphasis the writer's desire to seek attention to herself....
the bright green box at the top right hand corner is like the sun of the blog..bright..cheerful..and very important to her.Its where her friends' link are place and her cca's site..showing the importance the writer place on her school life and friends.
The archives are also placed there....reflects the writer's sedimental emotions that she will never forget about her past...

the entries are not of definite lengths refecting the writer;s unregular emothion..often not written in proper english showing her poor standard of the language and also that she thinks faster than she can type and the rush of dea and emotions also results in the inconsistent subjects. The regular use of dots(.....) shows the lack of ability to express oneself properly to use linkers or to connect ideas, and that much though and hesitation is reflected in the entries. the use of pauses also show the quick change of ideas from one to another...too fast to be explained.

basically..not much structure can be found in the website as the entries are often written under different state of emotions and the only similarities is the sudden increase in length in entries when the writer is feeling low.

no rhythem..only in the song lyrics
no rhyme.......
diction.......frequent pauses....sense of uncertainty strongly conveyed

pls grade this essay.....